Friday, August 1, 2025

Star Wars: Master & Apprentice by: Claudia Gray

 

Star Wars: Episode I: The Phantom Menace is a film that does not work.  Between a script of unnatural dialogue, an incredibly uneven pace, and George Lucas’ wishing to pioneer computer generated imagery without really understanding how to implement it, it’s one of those films with many problems as do all three of the Star Wars prequels.  It was received incredibly poorly upon release and no amount of revisionism is going to actually save it as a film despite some good ideas and Lucas’ insanely stupid penchant for worldbuilding.  Liam Neeson as Qui-Gon Jinn is a one of character that left an impression in the film for a reason, Neeson’s performance being one aspect of the film generally praised.  Master & Apprentice is an examination of Qui-Gon Jinn as a character and teacher before the prequel trilogy began, effectively being a prequel to a prequel.  Claudia Gray even includes an epilogue taking place right at the end of The Phantom Menace, though it is the more superfluous portion of the book.  It’s a flash forward that feels more a tie in to the already existing work than adding anything to the novel itself outside of Obi-Wan promising to train Anakin, something that is used as an attempt to push the prophecy through further defining Anakin’s character arc.  The trouble with that is that honestly, this really isn’t a book about Obi-Wan Kenobi.  Yes, he is one of the apprentices that the title refers to and he has a rather large role to play in the plot, but Gray isn’t interested in exploring him.  This is Qui-Gon’s book, through and through, and it’s all the better for it.

 

Qui-Gon Jinn as a character is decidedly portrayed as human: a Jedi trained under a master who fell to the Dark Side, even if it was something he never actually saw; a Jedi perhaps equally as tempted by the Dark Side in several ways; is offered a seat of power and internally struggles to accept or reject it.  He eventually does reject it, the position of power being a part of the Jedi Council, but not entirely for altruistic reasons.  Yes, continuing Obi-Wan’s training is part of it, but Master & Apprentice is very much concerned with laying out, so the reader cannot possibly miss, that the traditions of the Jedi Order are generally outdated and going to eventually cause it to fall.  This is something that is present in the prequel trilogy, not even as hidden subtext but fairly obvious text.  Gray doesn’t posit that the Order should fall, but that it is inevitable that it will fall.  Now some of this is because this is a prequel to an already established story, but Gray also expands on the idea of the corruption.  Qui-Gon Jinn often flaunts the rules of the Jedi, taking advantage of what people assume versus what they actually know to achieve his aims, and it’s something he intentionally is passing down to Obi-Wan.

 

The model of master and apprentice is important, but it is also perhaps too singular.  Master & Apprentice is a book with several flashbacks to Qui-Gon’s own training to explore how he became the way that he is.  He was trained under Count Dooku, just before Dooku left the Jedi Order for his own reasons (revealed in the films to be training as a Sith), but not before training Qui-Gon Jinn to always question.  As a master, he’s stern, imposing, and Gray makes a great deal of playing on both a childlike fear and the reader’s own knowledge of Dooku as Sith.  Yet, he is the one to push Qui-Gon into exploring prophecy and history, the one to get him to cut loose just a little bit.  Gray using Dooku mostly in flashbacks has this interesting knock-on effect, the plot of Master & Apprentice cannot really include him logically, so instead she invents another student of his, now an adult requesting help from the Jedi.  The plot of the novel is probably the weakest aspect of the novel: it isn’t bad but Gray uses it as a facilitation for the flashbacks, and thus the larger characterization of Qui-Gon Jinn to happen.  It doesn’t serve Obi-Wan Kenobi as well as it could, because it isn’t a book about him, it’s about Qui-Gon.

 

Overall, Star Wars: Master & Apprentice is a fine example of how to expand the ideas of the Star Wars prequels, but has a tendency to be too reliant on what the reader already knows.  Claudia Gray has written a solid character driven novel, but there is one major player who is slighted by the narrative through reduction.  The best material is in flashbacks which have a great purpose for the overall narrative, but are still only a side element that holds a good novel from being a great one.  7/10.

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